College Admission Essays: An Introduction to You


by Lillie

Writing essays can be hard, especially when it’s an essay that will impact the rest of your life. When I sat down to write my college application essay I didn’t know what to say.

For some essays I had already written a previous essay that matched the prompt so I just read it over and turned it in. On other essays I wrote whatever came to mind. My essays weren’t bad, they just weren’t good. More importantly they didn’t reflect who I am or my ability to write very well at all. So as someone on the other side of that essay, I want to give you some advice.

  1. First and foremost take your time. Think about the prompt and brain storm what you want to write about ahead of time. This way you have more time to draft your essay and to receive critical feedback.
  2. Make sure your essay sounds like you. Ask yourself, “does this sounds like something I would write?” If it helps you, ask a few people who know you well. The people who review your essay want to know who you are and one of the best ways to do that is to show them your voice.
  3. Another thing that helps them get to know you is your topic. What are you writing about? Whatever you chose make sure it reflects who you are as a person, what makes you unique. It doesn’t have to be something big like starting a non-profit organization or meeting the president (though it can be), you just have to write about something you care about and why. Why is the ticket here, this lets the administrators in on what you’re passionate about and who you are. Your paper doesn’t have to list all of your good qualities, let the rest of your application speak for itself, it just has to reflect a part of who you are.
  4. It takes more than you to review. When it’s time to revise your paper it can be tempting to read through it yourself and proclaim it to be good enough, it’s uncomfortable to have people read your thoughts, especially people who know you. The other end of the spectrum is being so cautious that you have too many people reading your essay – while it’s always good to get some external advice you need to make sure that your paper is still your own. I’d say to have two or three people look over your essay before you revise it (after your own initial revision of course). Take in all of their advice and see what fits with your voice, what clarifies your ideas, and and improves your grammar. Overall. just think “if I were to implement this how could it make my paper better?” You may need to switch some things around completely in the end but having a strong essay is worth it.

Maybe you’re reading this and wondering if all of this really matters, maybe you could just wing it – after all that’s what I did and I still got into college right?

It’s possible for you to wing it and still do well but honestly I probably would have had a lot more financial support and less academic skepticism, if I hadn’t and if I could go back, I would rewrite that essay. If you skipped everything I wrote and just came down to here for some reason (and I wouldn’t blame you if you did this is getting pretty long) I’d like you to remember to put yourself into your essay, that’s what the whole point of these essays are- for the college to get to know you.

Check out some of these helpful links for some more advice and tips on writing a great essay!

Randy Levin – College Application Essays that Set You Apart

5 Tips for Writing a Personal Statement

Big Future – by The College Board

Dos and Don’ts in Writing College Application Essays

Writing the Successful College Application Essay:  Tips for Success

College Prep Guides: Writing an A+ Admissions Essay

Meeting New People


by Keeyonna

Hey it’s Keeyonna doing my first blog ever! I am so excited to experience this new journey with you at MCTC.

With new experiences come new people. No matter what, you will always be faced with meeting new people. Trust me, I know you don’t know everyone in this crazy world. Although I must admit it would be cool, it would also be impossible.

Since I have started college I have already begun meeting people and becoming friends without ever knowing it was happening. It’s not a test, it happens naturally, so don’t become overwhelmed or stressed.

Meeting new people is a good and important strategy in life. Yesterday in class we happened to talk about people’s social anxiety and why it happens. Everyone is scared – that may look and sound stupid – but the fact of the matter is most of the time we’re all thinking the same thing.

When it comes down to meeting new people just go for it, and be yourself. Once you come to realize all you have to do is be yourself, I’m confident you’ll notice that all the stress will go away as well.

Have an awesome day and if you have questions and or comments, please leave them below!

Introducing Lillie – Calvin College

LilyI love music and sing every day. I can’t go a day without music—it lives in my head but won’t pay rent. Lots of people think I’m funny and I make them happy. I’m not funny but I do like making them happy. I have a tendency to have the perfect words walk into my mind then leave a note saying “Sorry not fast enough.” It’s okay though. I still like the words.

  • High School: North Community High
  • College: Calvin College  in Grand Rapids, Michigan
  • Intended Major: English, Secondary Education
  • Dream Career: a teacher with free rein over what’s taught and the methods I can use
  • Hobbies / interests: Singing, tennis, reading, making bracelets, watching movies/TV, writing
  • Celebrity Crush: Leonardo DiCaprio
  • Favorite thing about Minneapolis: There’s so much opportunity if you know how to find it

Introducing Keeyonna – MCTC

KeyonnaI am ready to explore a bigger world, to learn from different experiences, to love life with more to see. I love to travel and take family road trips. I take a selfie in every location on the way. I also love to take pictures of everything and create art in multiple ways. I am great with people and love having a conversation, over-thinking the smallest things – they’re the funniest conversations ever; for example the emojis on kik. One day I just stared at them asking why because half those faces I couldn’t make in reality. It just breaks my heart.

  • High School: Washburn High
  • College: Minneapolis Community and Technical College
  • Intended Major: Visual Arts
  • Dream Career: To become a tattoo artist while also doing some photography on the side
  • Hobbies: Anything art related, hanging out with friends, video games, listening to music
  • Spirit Animal: Wolf
  • Celebrity Crush: MCM Tyler Posey; WCW Jamel Monae